Revising assignments | English homework help

Hi,

I have done two assignemnts and submitted them to teacher but I got teacher’s feedback on both assignemnts and my grade is D on both assignemnts.

Teacher returned both assignemnts with his detailed feedback and want me to redo them by following his feedback  and submit them again.

Therefore i want someone who could revise both assignemnts as par feedback given by teacher. The feedback of teacher given on the assignemnt files attached. I already got D on both and this is last chance I got to resubmit them therefore I really want perfect job as par teacher’s instructions and feedback.

i want it done in less than 5-6 hours.

Please let me know if you can help.